Friday 22 June 2018

My waiting writing


This is my waiting poem. We read a poem called The Squash Club and Mr Wood asked us to write about a time we had to wait. I'm pretty happy with it. It took me a few goes to get it right. What do you think?

6 comments:

  1. Great poem Luke well done.

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  2. Wow Luke! This poem is excellent. I like how you can really feel the waiting. I remember waiting in the car for my mother. You should be proud of this. Can we share this in the Greymouth Evening Star when we are asked to do a page again? It is fabulous!!!

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    1. You can use my writing for the Greymouth Evening Star

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  3. Lol love your honesty Luke 😁

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  4. That’s a pretty good poem and so honest.

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  5. Well done Luke, I love this poem! I can imagine what it would have been like waiting in the car. Great to see you are still working hard on your writing and can’t wait to see more. I am really proud of you!

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