Hello this is my work on writing. It is my reflection about our class camp to Westport. You should read it and you can hear all about what we did on camp. Next time on camp I would like to go to bed earlier so I can enjoy the activities more.
Hi Luke, it's Raphaela from St Patrick's school Greymouth here!! I agree with you, I would like to go to bed early to! It looks like you did a lot of fun stuff on camp, you must of learnt a lot I love the way you have used different colors that really stand out, but next time could you make the writing a bit bigger? It was hard to see, even with the bright colors Bye for now Rapahaela
Hi Luke, it's Raphaela from St Patrick's school Greymouth here!!
ReplyDeleteI agree with you, I would like to go to bed early to! It looks like you did a lot of fun stuff on camp, you must of learnt a lot I love the way you have used different colors that really stand out, but next time could you make the writing a bit bigger? It was hard to see, even with the bright colors
Bye for now
Rapahaela